Thorny Path Chapter 2

I posted up chapter 2 of Thorny Path last night. That surely must be a new record for me. Two chapters in one day! O.o

I'm also in the middle of writing chapter 3. That should be finished by the end of the day, and will be available for reading online tonight... hopefully.

The story's only had about 20 hits so far, which isn't all that surprising, sadly. I wonder how I could get the word out about the UDDUP manga so more people can start reading it, and enjoying its awesomeness? :O On a brighter note, I have 2 fantastic reviewers already, who actually put an effort into their reviews instead of the usual 'update plx' and no more. Thank you, you two! You know who you are! :D

As for Entwined. I'm about halfway through chapter 14. I'll probably finish that chapter before writing any more of Thorny Path, but it shouldn't take all that long. :)

Back to the grindstone then! :D

New Fan Fiction

Yes, I know, I probably have too much on my plate already, but I just couldn't help myself. >.>

I've just posted the prologue up for my new fan fiction called Thorny Path. It's based on the Until Death Do Us Part manga, which is sorely under-read I might add! It is also extremely poorly represented, fan fiction wise, which was a contributing factor to me writing this now.

The story is based around the manga's two main characters - Mamoru and Haruka. In the manga you can tell a romance is bound to bloom between them, but Haruka is only 12 at the start of it, so I'm using some artistic license to move my own story on in years a bit to make the romance a bit less... icky. :p It is first and foremost an action story though, so expect lots of kick ass swordplay and general awesomeness. ;)

Now to finish Chapter 14 of Entwined, so I don't feel too guilty. :P

Small Passage of Fiction

Well, I just received the marks back from my first assessment for my writing course. It was less than I had hoped for at 76%. There were several parts to the assessment, the passage of fiction being the second part. I'm going to post it here for you to read. :)

Lost Hope

The day had finally come. All the trouble, the hardships, the intensely difficult training; it had all been for this day.

Vera lazily surveyed the room. She barely took note of the furnishings. The bed she had slept in the night before was still unmade, the twisted sheets attesting to the restlessness she had been feeling for several days now. She paused as she noticed her reflection in the full length mirror that was hanging on the wall beside her.

Unconsciously, she tugged at the hem of the silky blouse she was wearing, smoothing the material. Her eyes trailed upwards to her face. What she saw there startled her. Fingertips gingerly probed the smooth skin of her cheeks, tracing a line to the corner of one eye. Why was her skin damp? She saw her fine, blonde eyebrows knit together in a frown and her eyes widened as the memories came flooding back to her.

Oh yes, it was that day. The day that was supposed to fulfil her life’s wishes. The one she had been working towards since before she could remember. Yet, all she had dreamed of, all she had hoped for, had been blown away by a single piece of news. Fresh tears rolled freely down her cheeks.

It was gone.

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Vera stepped out of the hotel room, closing the door behind her. No matter how upset she was, she couldn’t let it show outwardly. Her hands trailed to her hair, yet again, checking it was all in place. It had refused to sit flat, so she had twisted it all together and pinned it behind her head in a loose bun.

Taking a deep breath, she steeled herself for the day ahead of her and turned to walk the few feet to the elevator, almost barging straight into the front of an expensive looking, crisp white shirt in the process.

Practically leaping a step backwards, she bit back the scathing remark that was to be aimed at the wearer of the shirt - a slender, dark haired man of perhaps thirty years of age. Full lips curled into a smirk.

“I didn’t mean to startle you, Ma’am.” His voice held a gravelly tone to it, putting Vera immediately on edge.

She groaned inwardly at her own reaction. She had been in a daze for the better part of the morning, so much so that she hadn’t even noticed the man approaching her.

“It’s fine,” she mumbled dismissively. She really was not in the mood for any kind of human interaction at the moment.

She offered a half-smile, more out of politeness than any real sincerity and moved to walk past him and towards the elevator. The lingering scent of stale tobacco and something she couldn’t quite identify reached her senses as they passed each other. She mused over it for a moment before dismissing it.

“Vera Layton, yes?”

She paused at the sound of the gravelly voice again, her eyes widening slightly in surprise. Turning, she saw the man had taken only a few steps in the opposite direction.

“Who are you?” she asked, somewhat suspiciously.

That smirk was back on his lips. “Apologies for not introducing myself sooner. My name is Alec Kale.”

His hand slid into his suit jacket and he fumbled about until he found whatever he had been looking for. He flashed a toothy grin as he pulled out a small yellowing envelope.

“I believe this’ll be of interest to you, Ma’am.” He waved the envelope in front of him for added effect.

Vera stared blankly at the object in his hand for a moment, before her gaze shifted to his face. The grin had faded and he met her look confidently. She had no idea who this man was or the reason for his sudden appearance, but she presumed it was no coincidence that he was here now, on this day, after the news she had been given earlier.

“Very well, Mr. Kale. I’ll hear what you have to say.”

His lips twitched slightly, and Vera presumed he was trying to suppress that annoying smirk.

“Good choice, Miss Layton.”

He strode over to her, his immaculate leather shoes thudding softly on the carpeted floor and offered her the envelope.

Vera grasped the yellowing paper, but as she tried take it, Alec tightened his own grip. She glanced at the man’s face, half scowling. His head was cocked slightly to one side, all traces of humour had disappeared from his features.

“I hope you’re ready for what you’re about to discover, Miss Layton.”

(Word Count: 761)

Entwined Chapter 13

Woohoo, I finally finished Chapter 13 of Entwined! Oh yes, and posted it up too! Clicky here if you want to take a look. ;)

Wow, that sure took some time, huh? Sorry, sorry. Initially, I wasn't too happy with it, but after re-reading it and tweaking it a bit, I'm sort of okay with it now. Not very encouraging, eh? >.>

Ack well, now to get started on Chapter 14! :D

NaNoWriMo

If you've not heard of it before, this post title's probably got you wondering what I'm smoking, right? Well, not to fear! It's only tobacco! Anyway, NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month, and it's being running for a few years (not sure how many exactly) during the month of November. Basically, it's a challenge to write a 50,000 word (or more) novel from scratch within the space of that month.

The idea is to simply just write and not worry about content too much, or editing. That comes in December. :P The only reward if you reach the goal, is some downloadable certificate, but I think the sense of accomplishment you would get is a sufficient reward, amirite? Anyhoo, here's a link to my profile page, and you can go and sign up from there or read more, etc, if you're interested!

I'm at 11,545 words at the moment, so it's going not too badly. Fingers crossed for me! :P

Oh, and Entwined Chapter 13 is almost finished. Go me!

Shame On Me!

Well, it's been a while, but thought I'd post an update here. :)

I'm busy studying away at the moment. Well, technically, not really studying, as the course I'm doing is a writing one. It doesn't really require 'study' per se.

I'm part way through writing Entwined Chapter 13. Haven't really had the time to finish it though. I did open up the document yesterday, but then was called away to do something else. >.>

I've also written quite a bit more for my original fiction, so that's coming along nicely.

I'll post a small passage of fiction here that I had to write for my coursework. 75 word limit.

The sun had set hours ago, leaving the cramped, overly-filled office space in a state of gloom. The usually glaring overhead lights were off and the only source of illumination came from an old, barely functioning table lamp.

A solitary figure sat behind the dull glow of the lamp, half hidden behind a clutter of office paraphernalia stacked haphazardly on the desks surrounding him. He was scouring through a dog-eared day planner, muttering to himself.

(Word count: 75)

Entwined Chapter 12

Oh, I completely failed at keeping this blog up to date this time. >.>

Well, Chapter 12 has been up for a good week or two now. Oops! I have excuses though! Yay!

I'm actually on the Isle of Arran at the moment, on a little family vacation with my parents. To say the internet connection here is unstable, would be generous! Ah well, only a few days left then I'll be back in Sweden. :)

Theeeen, in the beginning of November, I'm off to L.A for 2 weeks. Woot! That should be interesting. *nod nod*

Anyway, because of all this hustle and bustle, Entwined will probably not be updated as much as I would like. It's bad enough already, I know, but real life must take priority. :<

I've already started on Chapter 13, so don't despair! :D